Dec. 22nd, 2008 12:44 am
Advent Day 22
Title: Possession
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: currently around an R
Word count: in progress
Notes: I am sorry, guys, but I am cheating today and posting something unfinished. It's not even part one of something, it's a very rough first draft of something I'd like to flesh out better. I am right about tapped out, though. So this is where I ask you to give back to me: please suggest what I can do to make this better. I know for sure that the pacing is all wrong.
Yes, I am a cop-out. Come on, you try finishing something every day for 24 days. xD Seriously, though, I would appreciate anything you have to offer on this. I'm going to come back to it in January and edit/rewrite it, because I like the idea, I just... am not doin it rite.
I love you all for sticking with me through all this! Two days to go~~~
( go on, poke at it with sticks, I dare you )